I can tell you're extremely talented. The rat and the creature are really well painted. That said, I am confused about what's going on in this picture. I don't necessarily need to understand the story, but I thought that foot was another rat for instance. The picture is just hard to make sense out of because of the overblown light. If you toned that down just a bit, I think this picture would read better. Otherwise it is gorgeous and I really love the design and motion of the creature.